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Writing Tips for My Nephew

My 13-year-old nephew emailed me a story he has been writing and asked for my feedback last week. I was very touched that he asked me and I wanted to give him pointers that were going to be practical and useful.

The thing is, though, I have no idea what standard one should expect from a teenager as I have only ever considered writing by adults. I didn’t want to patronise him in the way that adults can patronise teens so I decided that I would give him advice as one writer to another, regardless of his age.

I was looking over my email to him just now and it struck me that some of the tips I gave could actually be helpful to any aspiring writer so I thought I’d share some of them here:

1. Show not tell. This is what all writers must learn to do. Show us the scene and the surroundings so we can infer what is happening and you don’t have to tell us. For example*, “Dan waited outside the maternity ward. His palms were sweaty and he couldn’t stop fiddling with the lighter. He kept looking up expecting to see the doctor come through the surgery doors. What was taking so long?” We know he is anxious and impatient by seeing his actions. We can infer that his wife is through those doors undergoing surgery - probably because there is a problem with the pregnancy. That is “showing”.

Compare “Dan waited anxiously and impatiently outside the surgery doors of the maternity ward where he had brought his wife an hour ago because there was a problem with the pregnancy”. That is “telling” - it gives you all the information but it’s not as exciting. You’re not in there with Dan.

Look through your manuscript and see where you can change “telling” to “showing”.

2. Minimise the use of adverbs. This is what my editor at Hodder & Stoughton told me. If you are showing not telling, then you don’t need adverbs because your reader will know if your character is angry or timid and you don’t have to say “angrily” or “timidly”. Go through your story and strike out 95% of the adverbs. Keep only a handful and they will be even more powerful.

3. Minimise subordinate clauses. Subordinate clauses can work to give explanations or provide additional information. But they can also distract from the main action. For an action story especially, what you want to convey is a sense of immediacy.

For example*, “Some might have considered Anna a timid girl but on this dark night, for the sun had set some hours before, as she strolled slowly home from work, feeling tired, for it had been a long and difficult day in the office, when Anna was suddenly and brutally attacked, she felt it within her heart that now was the time to be strong and fight back with all her might.” This gives you a lot of information about Anna and her day at work and what her friends think of her. But it loses immediacy because we are not there with her in the attack.

Compare: “Anna was tired. It had been a long and difficult day at the office. On her usual route back from work, she walked more slowly that usual even though it was already dark. Suddenly, someone grabbed her from behind. …..” And then you can describe the scene where she fights back. We do not need to know yet that her friends think her timid. You can always include that later, perhaps in a scene with her friends talking about how brave she was and how that was unexpected for them. The main point in this particular scene is the attack and her fighting back.

Go through your story and see where you can cut out subordinate clauses that are not relevant for that scene right now.

So, whatever age you may be, if you’re working to improve your writing, I hope these few pointers help you, too.

If you have any tips that you’d like to share with other writers, please do add them as a comment or email me, using the Contact link above.

*These examples are NOT taken from my nephew’s story - they are invented by me as illustrations.

Photo: thanks to this is your brain on… on flickr.com

Posted by Yang-May Ooi on Wednesday, October 10th, 2007 at 2:00am

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More Social Networking Publishing

Following from my post on SlushPileReader.com, where readers can vote for unpublished manuscripts to get a publishing contract, Amazon.com and Borders are also getting in on the act with their own versions of the democratic publishing ideal.

See the January magazine article Looking for a New Publishing Paradigm

These business models all rely on one of the characteristics of social media - user-participation. On the bookmarking site, Digg.com, you can bookmark on online article that you like and it will appear in a public page on Digg. Other readers who then follow the link to read the article you bookmarked can then vote for that item - the more votes it has, the higher the ranking on the Digg page and more readers will see it. Wikipedia is dependent on users making and editing entries.

In general, experts take the view that only 10% of visitors on a site participate in any active way eg leaving comments or other action that contributes to the site or enterprise offered by the site. Digg is very technology and sports biased. I expect that the people who populate Wikipedia are serious fans of whatever topic they are writing about and enjoy the kudos of being an expert. Many other user-generated site I’ve come across has a strong bias towards the interests of young guys with a tecchy, gadget-, sports-, or auto-focused interest. While there are many book lovers who are young guys, I have a sense that the majority are women who love books, the physical things, and may not have such a passion for reading their novels online - and have less of a fervour about being an expert. I would be very interested to watch how these publishing business models pan out and whether there’s going to be a bias towards sci-fi, fantasy and male-readership genres.

I also note that these ventures are all US based. America is notoriously self-focused when it comes to book publishing and it is hugely difficult to get your book published if you’re not American - even if, as a non-native, you write about a US setting with American characters, it’s very difficult to get it past the US literary sniffer dogs. I wonder if these ventures will let in more non-American manuscripts or if we will still find only US books getting through. (I don’t know if there’s a condition of entry that rules out non-US manuscripts - does anyone know?)

Am I portraying gender stereotypes here? What do you think? Please add a comment.

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Posted by Yang-May Ooi on Thursday, October 4th, 2007 at 1:00am

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Social Network Publishing

One of the characteristics of social networking online is the interactive, community element. On a blog, readers can comment on posts. On a photo-sharing site like Flickr, users can pool their photos into Groups. On YouTube, you can post a video response to a video you’ve just watched. On Wikipedia, you can edit the online encyclopaedia or discuss an entry with other users.

A new publisher, SlushPileReader.com has just launched where authors can submit their manuscripts and readers can vote on whether or not that manuscript should be published as a book.

On the Book Standard, one of the company’s founders, Johanna Denize is quoted as saying:

“The world of literature is en extremely subjective world. An author may only have one shot at having his manuscript read and if the particular editor or agent who reads it doesn’t like it—that’s it. Game over. Slush Pile Reader will change that and give authors a chance to be read not just by one person but by many.”

When a book is selected for publication via this reader voting process, the company is committed to publish it in the traditional way and the author is paid an advance along with receiving royalties.

Book Standard comments:

“Slush Pile Reader is launching at a great time, as many publishers are taking into consideration the public’s opinion of a manuscript before publishing it. Simon & Schuster is one publisher that has taken special care, joining with Media Predict to decide which proposals are likely to succeed and teaming up with Gather.com for the First Chapters and First Chapters Romance competition, where Gather.com members vote on excerpts from manuscripts on the site.”

The one thing that’s not clear to me is whether the readers are paid anything for their “work” by giving input to the publishing process in this way. Perhaps there’ll be enough people who’ll do it for the fun of it - and who would enjoy being in the influential position of making or breaking the career of a would-be author.

Posted by Yang-May Ooi on Friday, September 28th, 2007 at 2:00am

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Copyright in the Digital Age

This is a cross-post from my communications and social media blog, ZenGuide

Last week, I gave a presentation at the Copyright Licensing Agency’s annual open meeting about The Impact of Web 2.0 on copyright issues. It was a packed hall with over 180 people, many of them standing. The delegates ranged from authors and content producers to publishers and librarians and knowledge management professionals in education and business organisations. Althought I couldn’t make it for the whole of the round table discussion on digital information and copyright chaired by Chris Bryant, MP, I managed to catch the tail end of it. I also had the chance after the event to speak to a few of the delegates, including representatives from the BBC, a photographic rights agency, a publisher and a corporate knowledge management professional.

I’m jotting down here some of my impressions of the issues from the conference - these are no more than impressions and vignettes of the discussions as they were aired and raise more questions for debate rather than giving firm answers.

  • The government is making funding available for schools to help students become more internet- and social media- literate but there are apparently delays due to concerns about schools using materials off the internet in breach of copyright. However, there are apparently special sites offering copyright-free material for schools and educational establishment for just this purpose. But, overall, can the government with all its unwieldy bureaucratic machinery be the right instrument for change is the fast moving area of online technology and networked communication and enterprise?
  • Is digital rights management here to stay? Or will content producers like the BBC have to accept the fact that they will have to let go off their rights to a product some time after it’s been produced?
  • At the moment, the likes of the BBC can still find a market to sell its high quality products like its natural world series etc due to the fact that pirated versions on the internet are of low quality. It is probably not long before the technology will be freely available to upload high quality pirated versions online. What then for the original content producers?
  • Is there a future for book writers when digital readers become more widely available? At the moment, book lovers are still attached to the physical book but as the young techno-loving iPod wearing millenials and their children start to outnumber us oldies, will they adapt more enthusiastically to electronic book readers? If so, will that be an opportunity for “bijou” writers who don’t produce blockbusters to gain a wider readership through digital distribution because they won’t be at the mercy of the bookshops for distribution? Or will it be a threat because their work can now be easily copied and freely distributed illegally?
  • Chris Bryant mentioned the estate of German playwright Bertolt Brecht. The estate were apparently restrictive for a long time in granting rights for Brecht’s works to be used, quoted, performed or edited. For example, his plays in their original would run for over 3.5 hours which is difficult to market to today’s theatre-going audiences. However, they have recently been more open in rights granting and the result has been that more Brecht plays are being performed and the increased exposure generally from the dissemination of his works through freer rights has resulted in greater revenue returns for the estate.
  • The panellists in the main discussion all called for flexibility in managing copyright - yes, it is important to protect and value the products of creativity and hard work but in this digital age, it’s important to be flexible to enable the sharing of information and knowledge.
  • I was struck by the comment of a university representative about the difficulties of printing off 50 copies of an online article to include in a student pack for discussion on one of the university’s courses. It’s ironic in that the founding principle of the World Wide Web was that the technology was meant to make information freely available for all…

What do you think? Have you had experiences around copyright issues and social media or online digital technologies? I’d love to hear your views - please add a comment or email me.

Photo: of Sony Digital Reader thanks to askdavetaylor.com

Posted by Yang-May Ooi on Tuesday, September 25th, 2007 at 1:00am

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Free books

The print on demand revolution has been taken one step further in China where readers can order free, personalised books online - the catch is that they have to agree to advertising being inserted.

According to China Business News:

When selecting which books they want from BookGG, users can choose from a number of sponsors who wish to advertise in the books, and how many adverts they are willing to have. The location of adverts - front, back, middle or in page corners - can also be specified. If users agree to have enough adverts, the books will be provided to them free of charge.

Customers can also ask for books to be customized, for example, by having their names printed on the cover.

Once customers have made their selection, BookGG re-binds the books it acquired from publishers, inserting whatever adverts have been selected, before dispatching them.

You can read the full interview with Shen Bo, the publishing company’s president at China Business News.

Similar “permission”-based business models are taking hold in the mobile phone industry where content providers offer free content to mobile users if they agree to view adverts - or premium versions if the user prefers not to have ads.

Is there a business model for self-publishing authors to find investors/ venture capitalists for their book in exchange for advertising ? Certainly, product placement with funding in fiction has already occured - I think BMW offered prizes for short stories featuring their cars and I seem to recall a famous sex-and-shopping female novelist having designer brands sponsor one of her books (can anyone remember the author and which book it was?).

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Posted by Yang-May Ooi on Wednesday, September 19th, 2007 at 1:00am

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Researching a Non-Fiction Book

I’ve just started work on my new book project New Trends in International Public Relations. As you can guess from the title, it’s not a thriller or a novel. It’s a non-fiction book aimed at business communicators, PR practitioners and marketeers.

This is my first non-fiction book and it’s an exciting challenge - but also a little daunting.

As with my two novels, my co-author Silvia Cambie and I started with putting together an outline. We then sent this to our commissioning publisher Kogan Page for them to approve it before we started any other work. Now that they’ve given us the go-ahead, stage two is the research.

I also started the writing process for my novels with research.

For The Flame Tree, I learnt all about geology and construction to make the central development project in the story - and the ultimate disaster at the heart of the book - as believable as possible. For Mindgame, I researched mind manipulation techniques and Creutzfeld-Jakob disease (the brain disease that is generally known as “mad cow”).

But the great thing about fiction is that you can take the key elements of your research and blend it with your imagination to re-create hard facts and reality into the fictional world that you’re imagining. You can bend the scientific facts so long as the outcome is within the realms of possibility. You can also use verbal sleight-of-hand - for example, in The Flame Tree I needed the hero Luke to discover a fatal flaw in the construction project that would mean that it is unstable and likely to collapse. In a short paragraph, Luke works on the data he has found and through clever calculations, he finds discrepancies and realises that the foundations are too shallow and the blueprints for the building have been falsified. That’s all I need to say - I don’t need to prove to you his calculations.

In a non-fiction book, I have to prove everything. Every statement I make has to be based on some authority and I need to cite the source. Yikes.

So my research process for this new book project is much more meticulous and I am careful to keep a note of the web link, the name and contact details of anyone I have approached for their input, the name and page number of any book I refer to. Interestingly, blogging has really helped me in this process - without thinking about it, when I blog, I always add links to sources where I’ve derived some information or to other websites where you could find further writing on a particular subject. Non-fiction citations are similar, I guess - the main difference is that instead of a link, I would add a footnote.

If you’re interested to see how the book is going, I’ve posted my first bit of research for the book on my communications and social media blog, ZenGuide - it’s part of the introductory chapter and tells you all about the world’s first website.

Related posts

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Posted by Yang-May Ooi on Wednesday, September 12th, 2007 at 2:00am

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Enterprising Writers - Caro Fraser turns to self-publishing

caro This is part of my series on Enterprising Writers, where self-published or other entrepreneurial writers can share their stories and tips.

Caro Fraser is the bestselling author of the Caper Court series, who guestblogged here on Fusion View last year about her novel A World Apart. She has since been writing her new novel, A Breath of Corruption, which she will be self-publishing later this year. She writes here for the first time about why she has chosen to go down the self-publishing route after a successful career along the traditional publishing path.

Caro writes:

As an established author with twelve novels under my belt, I never thought I’d find myself going down the self-publishing road. But two years ago I had a bad experience with a major publisher, involving distribution problems and a resulting fall in sales, and it was proving hard to find a publisher for my new novel, Breath Of Corruption the seventh in the Caper Court series of legal novels. The previous books had all sold well, and since I knew from the huge number of contacts from my website that there was a market for it, self-publishing seemed like the logical route to take. On looking into it, I discovered that at the more expensive end of the self-publishing market, the bulk of the work is done for you, while the cheaper options tend to be more time-consuming. I needed something which left me free to write, so, on a recommendation, I opted for Troubadour Publishing.

For a set fee in the region of £2,500, Troubadour offer a full publishing service, covering typesetting, cover design, author proofs, ISBN registration, and inclusion on Amazon and W H Smith Internet Bookshop. The rate varies depending on the number of copies you decide to have printed, but I worked out that unless I went for the top print-run of 2,000 copies, I would hardly break even. Besides, I’m not looking at selling all those copies straight away. As for storage of all those books, Troubadour charge a monthly fee of £20 for bulk storage of over 500 copies.

On top of that, Troubadour offer a marketing package (£350) which covers an initial marketing campaign, sending out review copies, arranging media coverage and distribution via agents. They’ve also given me my own web page to publicise the book, which links to my website.

Because the novel is part of a series, I wanted to maintain a certain image, so I commissioned a designer, Helen Chapman, who had worked on previous jackets in the series to design the cover. That cost £800 – money well spent, as far as I was concerned, as her work is wonderful, and gives just the right tone and feel to the book.

The overall cost may seem like a lot (I saved £260 reading my own proofs!) but as an author with a track record, it’s important that my end product should be of a high quality. I need to get the book into bookshops, after all, so it has to be of a standard consistent with my previously published novels produced by the big publishing houses.

So far, the corrected proofs are with Troubadour, as is the finished artwork for the jacket, and publication is set for some time this autumn.

I’d like to think there’s a chance that sales will take off, and that I can show the world it can be done without the backing of a big publishing house but, as I said, the chances are that I may not break even on this venture. So why am I doing it? Well, because the book is there, and because there’s a market for it, and whatever else we writers are in this game for, it’s to be read. The feedback I get from my readers when they know there’s a new Caper Court novel in the offing makes it doubly worthwhile.

It’s also been an interesting and productive experience so far. Being with a big publishing house, one is cushioned against the hard realities of actually publicising and selling one’s work. I used to complete a novel, send it off to my agent, who then sent it off to my editor, and I’d more or less forget about it till publication. Self-publishing means having to do a lot more work – getting out there, speaking to bookshops to persuade them to stock the book, and generally self-promoting myself in a way I’d never have dreamed of five years ago. I think that’s a healthy thing. I’m even starting my own blog on my website in a few weeks, as a way of keeping in contact with my readership, letting them know about my new work and other ventures. So for me, self-publishing has extended the creative process, brought me closer to the realities of marketing my work, and it also means I’m engaging with my readership in a closer and much more satisfying way. What it means in terms of sales and maintaining my profile, I’ve yet to discover.

I you want to follow my fortunes, and find out how it all goes once the book is published this autumn, you can go to my website www.caro-fraser.com . Once the blog is up and running in two or three weeks’ time, I’d welcome feedback from readers and other writers.

Posted by Yang-May Ooi on Wednesday, August 1st, 2007 at 1:00am

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Website or Blog?

You may be interested in my post advising a writer about whether she needs a blog as well as her standard website - which I posted over on my communications and social media blog ZenGuide. See below for a taster and click on the link to go over to the full post
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Someone asked me the other day if she needed a blog since she already had a website. It struck me as we chatted that there are probably many people who are not clear about the differences between a website and a blog and what some of the advantages of having a blog are, over and above the benefit of having a website. My friend is a writer but the advice I gave her is also useful and relevant for solo professionals and small businesses so I thought I’d share them with you here

Posted by Yang-May Ooi on Tuesday, July 24th, 2007 at 1:00am

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Entrepreneur - Interview with Preethi Nair, author of Gypsy Masala (Podcast)

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My article “The Writer as Entreprenuer” is published this month by Mslexia, the UK literary journal for women writers. Researching the article, I interviewed three self-published authors, Preethi Nair, Mark Blayney and Julie Noble as well as former Managing Buyer at Waterstone’s, the UK book chain, now Commercial Director of The Friday Project, the UK publisher of books derived from blogs. They shared with me masses of invaluable information about the process of self-publishing as well generously telling me their personal stories.

With the agreement of Mslexia and my interviewees, I am posting onto Fusion View my research for the article.

Today, I am pleased to upload a podcast of the telephone interview I did with Preethi Nair, author of Gypsy Masala. Click on the grey player below to listen.


The other resources relating to my article for Mslexia are posted as follows:
Tue 10 July - Interview with Julie Noble, author of Talli’s Secret.
Wed 11 July - Interview with Scott Pack, book publishing insider
Yesterday, Thurs 12 July - Interview with Mark Blayney, author of Two Kinds of Silence

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Over the course of this last week, you’ll have gained some insight into the challenges of self-publishing your own novel, thanks to Mark Blayney, Julie Noble and Scott Pack, all of whom took the time to answer my questions in a great deal of detail.

It all sounds easy as a concept. Write your book. Set yourself up as a publisher. Get some copies of your book printed. Then selll them.

But - once you’ve got your pile of printed books - all 10,000 copies of them, sitting in your hallway - what do you do with them? What does it take to shift your stock? Do you have the skills and energy to turn from writer into business person and get out there to sell your books? Can you ever make a profit?

Preethi’s story is the stuff of legends. She really took self-publishing entrepreneurship to extraordinary heights by creating a fictitious persona in the form of publicist Pru Menon to publicise her self-published novel Gypsy Masala. She was so good at the job, she was even shortlisted for an industry award for publicist of the year.

Preethi tells us her story in her own words in this special Fusion View podcast.

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Click on the grey player and the end of this post to listen to the interview (approx. 55 mins).

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Further resources:

Preethi Nair

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Posted by Yang-May Ooi on Friday, July 13th, 2007 at 2:00am

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Entrepreneur - Interview with Mark Blayney, author of Two Kinds of Silence

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My article “The Writer as Entreprenuer” is published this month by Mslexia, the UK literary journal for women writers. Researching the article, I interviewed three self-published authors, Preethi Nair, Mark Blayney and Julie Noble as well as former Managing Buyer at Waterstone’s, the UK book chain, now Commercial Director of The Friday Project, the UK publisher of books derived from blogs. They shared with me masses of invaluable information about the process of self-publishing as well generously telling me their personal stories.

With the agreement of Mslexia and my interviewees, I am posting onto Fusion View my research for the article.

I’m posting today my email interview with Mark Blayney, author of Two Kinds of Silence


The other resources relating to my article for Mslexia are posted as follows:

Tue 10 July - Interview with Julie Noble, author of Talli’s Secret.
Yesterday, Wed 11 July - Interview with Scott Pack, book publishing insider
Fri 13 July - Podcast of my telephone interview with Preethi Nair, author of Gypsy Masala

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mark-blayney.jpg # Why did you self-publish?

Like most people considering self-publishing, I’d been submitting manuscripts for years to publishers and agents. I got the occasional encouraging letter, but mostly just the standard rejection slips. I initially thought, if I can produce a book, it would show some entrepreneurial spirit and might distinguish me from the slush pile the next time I submitted something.

# How did you go about self-publishing your novel? Did you use print on demand? If not, where did you store all the stock?

I used a ‘real’ printer – Cromwell Press in Trowbridge, who were very amenable to my modest little project! They didn’t mind the small print run; they were very friendly. I stored the stock in my mum’s garage – she raised an eyebrow to begin with, but 1,000 books in shrinkwrap doesn’t actually take up that much room. Well that’s what I told her anyway, and it’s too late when the truck turns up!

# How much did you spend? (If you are prepared to say…)

It cost me £3,000 for both books. But I took my own cover photos, a friend helped me with the design (a nightmare, really, getting the cover printer-ready) and I typeset it myself. If I had got someone else to design and typeset it, that cost would probably have at least doubled. It helps to have a reasonably short book – the price from the printer goes up noticeably for each 32 pages. I originally meant to publish the second book a year after the first, but there was a discount from the printer for running them together.

# How did you get the book into bookshops? (I’m particularly interested in this bit as it seems to require strong sales skills, persistence and stamina/ resilience that many writers would shy away from)

It was daunting and I didn’t enjoy it. Put a suit on, pretend you’re someone else, and try to be confident and polite at the same time. Local bookshops are very encouraging if you’re friendly and not too pushy – start with them, in an every increasing circle from your home! Trying to get into Waterstones or WHSmiths – I would say don’t even bother (but I’d be willing for someone to contradict me). Ottakars was the only chain who were positive towards me, and we know what’s happened to them. Independent bookshops will champion you as well, because they’re always looking for some competitive advantage over the chains - as long as they’re convinced the books will actually sell.

# What marketing did you do?

I made up some publicity materials – A3 sized boards with a large image of the cover, ‘Local author’ along the top and my endorsements from Beryl Bainbridge and John Bayley along the bottom. Don’t think that the bookshops ‘won’t want that kind of thing,’ because they were pleased I’d done it – it meant they put the stock in the windows, which helped me sell quite a few. If you add value to the bookshop by doing some of their work for them, they’ll be more positive towards you.

I made my own leaflets with ordering details on them – reasonably primitive, but they looked ok. You could pay someone to do that if you had a spare £100. (Looking back, the swearing I did at my printer would probably have been worth the investment. It took forever getting it right, so that you could fold the piece of paper into 3!)

Viral marketing is probably your best asset. People you speak to on the bus, in the lunch queue, in the pub, at a wedding… Most people prick their ears up with interest when you say you’re a writer, because they think it’s glamorous. Most people who showed an interest, bought the book.

I’m ashamed to admit I never got round to setting up a web site. I think that’s the obvious thing that will help these days.

# Do you have a background in business? What is your day job?

I was editing marketing papers, and when the company toyed with the idea of publishing books, I jumped at it. It gave me the contacts and the experience. If you are serious about publishing your own book, you could do a lot worse than getting a job with a publisher – it’ll show you what’s involved, how to plan the process (allow twice as long for each stage as you’d expect!) and what *not* to do. These days I’m a business writer (as Mark Stuart, because there’s another Mark Blayney who writes business books).

# What qualities and skills do you think a writer needs to have to become their own publisher, publicist, sales rep and distributor?

You need to be much more pushy, charming, energetic, thick-skinned and confident than I am. That’s the paradox – if we had all those skills we probably wouldn’t be writers, we’d be successful estate agents driving BMWs. But they’re not the qualities or values I suspect most of your readers will share. So… if you are going to self-publish… you have to pretend for a while. Energy is the key, and a willingness to take the knock-backs without being disheartened.

# How did “Two Kinds of Silence” come to the attention of the Somerset Maugham Award judges?

Pure cheek. I submitted it to them. As the publisher I was ‘Mark Stuart,’ publishing a book by ‘Mark Blayney’. So the answer is… fraud. When I was awarded the prize I panicked. What if there’s a rule that says you can’t be the publisher and the author? Fortunately they awarded it on merit – it was brave of them, really, to stick their necks out for an unheard-of writer and what was, frankly, a made-up publisher. It surprised me at the time and it still surprises me now. I’d like to meet the judges, I owe them a few pints.

# What returns did you make on your investment (financial or otherwise)?

I made a good profit on ‘Two Kinds of Silence’, but only because of the interest generated by the prize. ‘Conversations with Magic Stones’, after three years, I’ve broken even. I didn’t do it to make money, I saw it as a way of trying to lift the next book from proper publishers’ slush-pile; and as a satisfying thing to do; the books are on the shelf, and they look the way I want them to look.

# What have you been writing since “Two Kinds of Silence”? Are they being published in the “conventional” way ie by a “conventional” publisher?

I’ve finished a novel, ‘Carnival of Humans’. It’s set over a week in Budapest and is about characters’ pasts coming back to haunt them in different ways. There’s also a very unusual magic realism ending featuring an unexpected aggressor invading the city. Unfortunately I’ve been through three different agents in the last year, gone with the advice they’ve given me, and nothing has come of it. I’m about to agent it myself and see what happens. I’ll be content to self-publish again one day if no one’s interested.

# Do you see a trend towards self-publishing?

Yes, in that publishers are reducing their output, particularly of fiction and especially of new authors. And technology is making it easier not only to publish a book, but distribute it as well – the internet can bypass bookshops. When the technology advances to the point where people can make professional-looking books at home and sell them online, publishers might have a fight on their hands. On the other hand – Amazon make it very difficult for small publishers to make money, and Amazon is the only really viable non-bookshop channel to get decent sales from, unless you viral market your own web site successfully enough. That’s possible given enough time. But self-publishing will never really give Penguin and Faber a run for their money because customers will continue to value the brand of the traditional publisher. Rightly so, because whereas there are some gems being self-published, there’s also a lot of rubbish. The established publisher will always be the customer’s seal of quality.

# What would you say to those who still have a snobbery around self-publishing - ie who mistake it for vanity publishing?

The proof is in the eating. ‘There are good books and there are bad books – that is all.’ It doesn’t matter, in the final analysis, who they’re published by. All you’re lacking is the back-up of a third party; but then, ‘real’ publishers pour out an awful lot of rubbish as well. People who look down on self-publishing are confusing ‘quality’ with ‘commercial viability’. But it also helps to make it look professional - if it’s stapled together and looks ‘hand-made’, that inevitably reduces the customer’s perception of its quality, however good the content.

# What is your advice to writers who may be thinking of self-publishing?

I would exhaust the regular channels first. But if you really think your book is good, and publishers are still saying no, then go for it. Have a sensible print run – I did 500 of each book, and that was more than enough. Be prepared to do lots of marketing and running around, and don’t be disheartened by the negative voices. And make sure you have a regular job on the side!

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Further resources

Mark doesn’t currently have a website yet - though it will be ready in early August (www.markblayney.com). You can find out more via the Guardian article about Mark winning the Somerset Maugham prize

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Photo: thanks to the guardianunlimited.co.uk

Posted by Yang-May Ooi on Thursday, July 12th, 2007 at 2:00am

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